Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It’s true that animal
experimentation
has been overwhelmingly used to promote human medical and technology development. While
I accept it is unfair treatment to experimenting
Wrong verb form
experiment
animals
, I would support a limited amount of Change preposition
with animals
experimentation
instead
of sheer volume abuse.
Some people hold the view, in which I am in favor, Correct word choice
that human
human
would be better off trial medical Fix the agreement mistake
humans
experimentation
in animals
. A common example is that for those patients who have suffered from cancer, innovative medicine with necessary help from animal experimentation
in the pilot phase can potentially save their lives. I do agree that limited
amount of Correct article usage
a limited
experimentation
in large volume species rather than rare animals
, could be acceptable considering a trade off
in the biological cycle. Add a hyphen
trade-off
Experimentation
can be considered a tactic to balance the volume of other animals
, otherwise
, those animals
, such
as mice, might increase to
flooding numbers out of control.
Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
, I also
understand that critics contend animal experimentation
be banned from the perspective of altruism and equality. For example
, the first clone experiment has been
done on the sheep at the expense of sacrificing the sheep’s life if the Wrong verb form
was
experimentation
failed. Such
similar experimentation
would awake
human’s empathy Correct your spelling
awaken
to
creatures on the earth, rendering them to protest against unethical animal Change preposition
for
experimentation
. However
, I do think animal experimentation
is highly important to promoting medical treatment because no one can suffer from losing their lovers
in bad ill. So I believe those contenders would switch Fix the agreement mistake
lover
standpoint
if tragedy Fix the agreement mistake
standpoints
occurs
Wrong verb form
occurred
in
their loved ones.
In conclusion, animal Change preposition
to
experimentation
can be considered unethical from a saint
perspective, but I would say Change noun form
saint's
limited
amount of Correct article usage
a limited
experimentation
is crucial to promote medical development sustainably.Submitted by erminelyu on
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task response
Ensure a clear and specific thesis statement is present in the introduction to directly address the essay question.
task response
Try to support each viewpoint with more detailed, specific examples to strengthen the argument.
coherence cohesion
Use a range of cohesive devices accurately and appropriately to help the reader follow the argument more easily.
coherence cohesion
Structure paragraphs clearly with a single main idea in each paragraph, supported by examples and explanations.
