The pie charts below show the proportions of visits to Ireland last year by age group, and by gender, and type of visit.
The pie charts featured above compare the shares of travel
according to
age groups, as well as
by gender and types of visits in Ireland last
year.
Overall
, what stands out from the diagrams is that 25 to 54-year-old people tended to travel to Ireland, whilst people who were under 15 ranked last
. Besides
, most men opted to go to Ireland due to
business.
With regard to the first graph, it is clear that
visitors whose ages were 25-34, 25-44, and 45-54 had the highest percentage, with 23%, 19%, and 23%, respectively. The proportions of 16 to 24 and over 66-year-old travellers altogether formed nearly 20% of the total. Additionally
, there was little difference between the shares of people who were under 15 and between 55 and 64. While
the former accounted for 6%, the latter was higher by a margin of 5%.
Shifting the focus to the second one, it is apparent that the leisure visit was more popular than the business one. Men had the highest percentage of business trips with 13%, whereas
women stood last
with 4%. In addition
to this
, the disparity between the proportions of female and male visitors in leisure travel was merely 3%.Submitted by writingbhos on
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