The pie charts below show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995.

The pie charts below show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995.
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The
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illustrates the outcome of a survey regarding the different recreational
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of Europeans between 1985 and 1995.
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, the trend of
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enjoyed by adults in Europe consists of two types: social interaction and the use of technology
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as television and computer games with the former being less preferred than the latter. In terms of the most significant feature of
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, the largest category of
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being done for pleasure was watching television which accounted for more than one-quarter of the total venture.
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,the next segment that occupies 2nd on the
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is computer games at 27%. When added together, both of these
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utilize the use of technology which covered more than half of the total slice of the pie
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. In stark contrast, nearly more than two-fifths of
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which is at 43% require social interactions and outdoor plans. From others margin at 2% to talking with family at only 7% and conversing with friends at 26% which nearly competes with video games.
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