You have rented a house by a lake for the summer. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter •describe the house •describe how you are spending your time there •invite your friend to come and visit Begin your letter as follows: Dear………..
Dear Rahul,
The purpose of writing
this
email is to inform you that I have purchased a brand new house by Harrison Lake in Hope. The house has two floors that include four bedrooms, a laundry room,a kitchen and, a wide living area. The garage itself is spacious and has a space of minimum three cars to park.
Additionally
, I find this
house is pretty convenient and, comfortable because there is a public park just right in front of it. I spend my leisure time jogging in it as well and I definitely go to anearby
gym to keep myself fit.
Correct your spelling
a nearby
Moreover
, I want to let you know that I am going to through a great party and, invite my close-knits. It would be great if can take some vacations to come over and spend your precious time with me.This
would help us to recall our past memories as well.
I am looking forward to getting your reply,
Yours lovingly,
Takwinder Singh.Submitted by sandhuarsh1320 on
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Tone
Ensure to pay attention to the purpose of the writing task. Your letter starts with 'The purpose of writing this email...', which might be slightly formal for a letter to a friend. Consider using a more casual and friendly tone throughout.
Task Response
Focus on addressing all parts of the task. For instance, you could expand on the invitation by including specific dates or activities you hope to do with your friend if they visit.
Logical Structure
For a clearer logical structure, organize your letter into distinct paragraphs, each covering a specific topic (description of the house, activities, invitation). Also, consider a more explicit transition between ideas.
Cohesion
Use a variety of linking words and phrases to create better cohesion within and across paragraphs. This will help in making your letter flow more naturally.