Some people say the professional workers such as, doctors, nurses and teachers, who make greater contribution to the society, should be paid more than those people in the field of sports and entertainment.
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Introduction
Begin by introducing the topic in your own words, stating the key issue to be discussed. This sets a clear foundation for your essay.
Logical Structure
Structure your essay with a clear beginning (introduction), middle (body paragraphs), and end (conclusion). Each section should logically follow the previous one.
Supported Main Points
Develop main points with supporting details and examples. This strengthens your argument and makes your essay more persuasive.
Task Achievement
Ensure your ideas are relevant to the task and address the question directly. Avoid deviating from the topic.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use paragraphs to organize your ideas clearly. Each paragraph should have one main idea, supported by detailed examples and explanations.
Clarity and Vocabulary
Work on the clarity of your expressions. Use a variety of sentence structures and vocabulary to make your writing more interesting and accurate.
Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
Parents throughout the world place spend time reading with their offspring to prepare them for school where their literacy skills are further developed; however, recent research suggests that focusing on reading at an early age can be detrimental, and participating in fun activities would be far more beneficial. I am a strong advocate of this approach, and the benefits of it will be covered in this essay.
The development of social media has an impact on the relations and society of each people. The writer of this essay think that the benefits of using social media for communication outweigh the drawbacks.
I read in the newspaper about your plans to demolish the Castle because of the lack of funds to do the renovation. I would like to courage you to plan to maintain it rather than pull it down.
One of the many problems of world is related to the environment. It bacomes debatable also who's responsible in dealing with it. Is is national or global world? I would say both and depeding the degree of the problem. I will discuss it to this essay.
Academic performance of a student depends on several factors. According to some people, the guidance provided by the teacher will determine whether the student succeeds or not. Others opine that the attitude of the student is more important. In my opinion, a teacher certainly plays an important role in ensuring the academic success of the student; however, even if the teacher provides the best mentorship, the student will not succeed if they lack the right attitude.