You have reccently moved to another city but your bank has your old address and continues to send all the communication there. Write a letter to your bank Branch. In this letter mention: -Where you have moved? -What problem are you facing regarding the bank's communication? -What do you want them to do regarding old communication already sent to the wrong address.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you
this
purpose about my communications with the bank
. I have recently moved Change preposition
to other
other
Correct quantifier usage
another
place
. This
place
is so far to
the Change preposition
from
bank
. Moreover
, my all communication and address
Fix the agreement mistake
addresses
related
to your Add a missing verb
are related
bank
. This
is a big issue.
I have recently moved Change preposition
to other
other
Correct quantifier usage
another
city
. This
city
is so far to
the Change preposition
from
bank
. This
place
in
Add a missing verb
is in
city
centre. It is capital.
I have Add an article
the city
a
issue. I am suffering to come and go to far distance. I want to the Change the article
an
bank
contacts relate
to my Wrong verb form
related
currently
workplace. I am writing to you Change the adverb
current
in
Change preposition
on
this
aim. Firstly
, I wanted
move to Add the particle
wanted to
other
Change the wording
another place
other places
place
. By reason of, in this
city
there Add a comma
city,
are
a lot of car sound and very much traffics. Change the verb form
is
Secondly
, I forgot to contact the bank
.
However
, If you could help me a bit, I would have solved these problems. I want to pass my all things to my new workplace from my old bank
.
Yours faithfully,
Jasur uktamovSubmitted by soglomovsarvar on
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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure clarity and relevance in each paragraph. Each paragraph should focus on a single aspect of your request or issue. Avoid mixing different ideas in one paragraph.
Coherence & Cohesion
Create a clear logical structure for your letter. Start with an introduction explaining why you are writing, followed by paragraphs each addressing a specific point, and conclude your letter properly.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use paragraphs effectively, ensuring that each new main idea starts in a new paragraph. This helps in maintaining the flow and making your letter easier to follow.
Task Achievement
Clearly state the issue at the beginning of the letter, including the necessary details like your new address, the problem faced due to the address change, and your specific requests to the bank.
Task Achievement
Maintain a polite and formal tone throughout the letter. While your tone is generally appropriate, ensure consistency in formality and politeness.
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