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The graph shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.

The graph shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.
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The given line graph illustrates the information about the variation of
population
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 number in the U.S. state of Oregon in three different years with
the
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thirty year
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 interval, starting from 1940. The types of
population
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 are categorized into
Columbia
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,
Yamhill
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, and
Washington
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.
Overall
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, It can be seen that
Washington
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county
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County
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 had
biggest
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the biggest
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number of
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apply
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population
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 for the U.S. state of Oregon during the stated period in question compared to the other two particular counties. The historical trends show
Washington
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 as the major county of habitation, gradually rose from 75,000
people
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 in 1940 to 125,000
people
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 in 1970. After that, there was a sharp increase, reaching 245,000
people
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 in 2000. The
population
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 of
Columbia
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 and
Yamhill
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 started at the lower point compared to
Washington
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 state, with 25,000
people
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 and 30,000
people
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, respectively. Parallely, the quantities of both counties had slowly risen to 40,000
people
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 for
Columbia
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 and 45,000
people
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 for
Yamhill
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.
Finally
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, In the
yaer
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year
 2000,
Columbia
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 reached its top number of citizens at 75,000
people
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,
while
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Yamhill
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 reached its peak at 90,000
people
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.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, columbia, yamhill, washington, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • population change
  • significant increase/decrease
  • growth rates
  • economic opportunities
  • migration patterns
  • environmental conditions
  • rapid growth/decline
  • industrial development
  • natural disasters
  • governmental policies
  • historical data
  • economic conditions
  • environmental sustainability
  • technological advancements
  • social implications
  • economic implications
  • environmental implications
  • infrastructure demands
  • natural resources
  • community life
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