The diagram shows how apple is canned. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The image illustrates the whole complex production of canned
apples
, starting from the collecting to the despatch.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
process
consists Add an article
the process
from
14 different steps that flow one after another, without any loops. The whole production may be divided into four main parts, first of all, collection, followed by preparation after that goes cooking stage, and Change preposition
of
at the end
departing.
The process starts at a garden where Linking Words
apples
Use synonyms
Add a missing verb
are hand
hand picked
from trees and after that transported to the future preparation. After that Add a hyphen
hand-picked
apples
Use synonyms
washed
and filtered by the level of quality. The selected Add a missing verb
are washed
apples
Use synonyms
sent
to the peeling stage, which is followed by slicing.
After preprocessing, starts canning step, at which Add a missing verb
are sent
apples
Use synonyms
placed
into cans. After that, packed Add a missing verb
are placed
apples
Use synonyms
cooked
and sterilized, at Add a missing verb
are cooked
this
stage goods are almost ready Linking Words
to
Change preposition
for
the
despatch. Correct article usage
apply
However
, before Linking Words
this
, cans should be properly Linking Words
labeled
and stored. The final step is delivering packed products to shops.Change the spelling
labelled
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Vocabulary: Replace the words apples with synonyms.
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