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The Chart below gives information about the percentage of people having COVID-19 symptoms. Summarize the information by adding and reporting the main features, and make relevant comparisons where relevant.

The Chart below gives information about the percentage of people having COVID-19 symptoms. Summarize the information by adding and reporting the main features, and make relevant comparisons where relevant.
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The chart presents facts and figures in
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percentage
 about the
Symptomps
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Symptoms
 caused by COVID-19.
This
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summary
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report
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identify
main
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 features
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 and
try to
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compare some key aspects to
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 at a conclusion. Despite all the
side-effects
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 of the
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disease
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, having
fever
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 is a visibly
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 higher among the victims
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 to other signs given . Yet, the headaches
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 been
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mejor
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major
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 slightly next to
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having
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 muscle pains and cough.
However
, the
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respiratory
 difficulties rank lesser in the
report
 though breathing difficulties caused many deaths in the world
due to
this
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pandemic
endemic
according to
 WHO reports. There seems to be
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 interconnection between three major symptoms given in the
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such
 as fever, headache, muscle pain and cough.
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Because
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 identified, the mitigation, prevention and eradication could be a complex and
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 process for health experts in the field of medicine. In
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, the
report
 is a quite comprehensive study
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 the signs and
symptopms
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symptoms
 of COVID-19 health
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catastrophe
 and came -up with
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vital information to
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work on
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 in dealing with the most-challenging health crisis in
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recent human history which crippled many aspects of human civilizations.
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