The Chart below gives information about the percentage of people having COVID-19 symptoms. Summarize the information by adding and reporting the main features, and make relevant comparisons where relevant.

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muscle pains and cough.

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vital information to

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in dealing with the most-challenging health crisis in

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recent human history which crippled many aspects of human civilizations.

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The Chart below gives information about the percentage of people having COVID-19 symptoms. Summarize the information by adding and reporting the main features, and make relevant comparisons where relevant.

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