The diagrams below show how chocolate is made and how the price of a chocolate bar is divided up among those involved in the process.
The illustration depicts the whole production of
chocolate
bars and how the income from this
divided
among parts that Add a missing verb
is divided
involved
Add a missing verb
are involved
into
the process.
The whole algorithm is complex and Change preposition
in
have
two Change the verb form
has
inputs
points and three Change the noun form
input
seporate
outputs, Correct your spelling
separate
overall
, the process consists from
10 stages. It is evident from the data that, the price of a product mainly summarized of the ingredients cost and supermarkets part.
The production starts from the grinding of cocoa bins, part of them Change preposition
of
Add a missing verb
are throwen
throwen
away, Correct your spelling
thrown
while
the other half is a resource for cocoa liquor. To produce industrial chocolate
ingridients
like liquor, sugar and cocoa butter should be mixed together.
The price is divided between 5 categories. The most income from selling Correct your spelling
ingredients
chocolate
receive
supermarkets, their part is more than Correct subject-verb agreement
receives
one third
of Add a hyphen
one-third
all
the price. Correct determiner usage
apply
On the other hand
, chocolate
companies and farmers get 10 and 4 percent
Change the spelling
per cent
respectfully
. Other cost goes to taxes and ingredients.Replace the word
respectively
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