The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff

members across the faculties of a major university in 2016.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main

features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the sex
proportion
of academic staff in seven faculties in 2016.
Overall
, it is seen that the
faculty
with the highest male
proportion
is Engineering, which is recorded at 85%. The least sought-after work for men is education.
This
was recorded at 25%.
On the other hand
, the
faculty
which is most popular with
females
is Education, which was 72%
while
in the engineering fields,
females
showed the lowest popularity. All
faculty
of Business, Law, and Science presented over 60% for Males in 2016
while
the
proportion
of
females
recorded less than 40%. The
proportion
of
females
working in the
faculty
of Arts and Medicine was less than 50%. The
faculty
which showed the slightest gap between women and men is the
Faculty
of Medicine. They just had a 1% difference between them.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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