The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the sex
proportion
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of academic staff in seven faculties in 2016.
Overall
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, it is seen that the
faculty
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with the highest male
proportion
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is Engineering, which is recorded at 85%. The least sought-after work for men is education.
This
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was recorded at 25%.
On the other hand
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, the
faculty
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which is most popular with
females
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is Education, which was 72%
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in the engineering fields,
females
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showed the lowest popularity. All
faculty
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of Business, Law, and Science presented over 60% for Males in 2016
while
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the
proportion
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of
females
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recorded less than 40%. The
proportion
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of
females
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working in the
faculty
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of Arts and Medicine was less than 50%. The
faculty
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which showed the slightest gap between women and men is the
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of Medicine. They just had a 1% difference between them.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, faculty, females with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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