Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

The

number

of individuals in many species is critically low,

while

other species are

disapearing

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disappearing

so fast that they are on their way to extinction. The reason is that wild

animals

are being overly hunted for food and their other products.

This

calls for

government's

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enforcement of

policy

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the policy

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to prohibit

such

activities. Many

animals

are captured for their meat or their other products,

such

as ivories, fur or hair.

Due to

the recent increase in economic development in Eastern countries

such

as China or Vietnam and as people in these countries believe that eating exotic animal meat or using products made from

animal's

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ivories, hair or fur will bring great fortunes, the demand for these

animals

skyrockets.

This

need causes poachers to increase their hunting activities, and a lot of elephants, tigers

or

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and

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rhinoceros

has

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been killed. In brief, these poor

animals

have been hunted cruelly because of human selfish, insatiable desires.

Therefore

, one of the most effective solutions

are

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is

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prohibitive actions from the government regarding poaching. There must be an increase in

number

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a number

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of rangers, enforcers and laws to restrict poachers from killing wild

animals

. There are studies

shown

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have shown

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that in Vietnamese provinces where the law enforcers actively captured and punished poachers hunting elephants, the

number

of wild

elephant

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elephants

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increased

more

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by more

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than 50

percent

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per cent

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that

that in

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to

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provinces where no actions are made

from

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by

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the policymakers to reduce hunting. It is crystal clear that actions from the government are necessary to prevent the culling of wild

animals

. In summary, many

animals

are on the brink of extinction

due to

being hunted which

call

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calls

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into action the enforcement of

goverments

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governments

government

. Only when

number

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a number

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of hunting activities significantly

drop

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drops

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, wildlife can flourish again.