The chart shows how many proportion of people in different 5 cities who made drinking or buying coffee habits in Australia
The chart gives information about how many proportion of
people
in different 5 cities who made drinking or buying coffee
habits in Australia.
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a cafe
coffee
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exception
of Adelaide, the fewest Correct article usage
the exception
people
preferred to buy fresh coffee
in each city. Moreover
, the difference between the biggest and the smallest figures was significant.
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cafe
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cafes
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) stood first,
with the same percentage of people
making. In the mean time
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meantime
people
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of
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coffee
respectively.
As for People
who live in Sydney and Brisbane, most of them have gone to cafe
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cafes
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