The graph shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.

The graph shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.
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The graph illustrates the people change in the U.S. state of Oregon in three different districts in
Columbia
,
Yamhill
and
Washington
from 1940 to 2000.
Overall
,
The
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most
community
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communities
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were in
Washington
and it had a significant rise from 1970 up to 2000. In 1940,
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the population
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population
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the population
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of
Columbia
was around 28
thousand
likewise
in
Yamhill
public was 30
thousand
. In
Washington
, residents were 75
thousand
, and
this
district had the highest community in the three counties of Oregon. In 1970,
population
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the population
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of
Washington
started to
signficant
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significant
significantly
rise
while
the citizens of
Columbia
and
Yamhill
slightly
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.
To
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In
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2000 the
population
of
Washington
ammounted
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amounted
to around 241
thousand
besides
Columbia
and
Yamhill
whose
population
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populations
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amounted to only approximately 76
thousand
and 90
thousand
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words columbia, yamhill, washington, population, thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population change
  • significant increase/decrease
  • growth rates
  • economic opportunities
  • migration patterns
  • environmental conditions
  • rapid growth/decline
  • industrial development
  • natural disasters
  • governmental policies
  • historical data
  • economic conditions
  • environmental sustainability
  • technological advancements
  • social implications
  • economic implications
  • environmental implications
  • infrastructure demands
  • natural resources
  • community life
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