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The graph shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.

The graph shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.
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The graph illustrates the people change in the U.S. state of Oregon in three different districts in
Columbia
,
Yamhill
 and
Washington
 from 1940 to 2000.
Overall
,
The
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most
community
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communities
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 were in
Washington
 and it had a significant rise from 1970 up to 2000. In 1940,
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the population
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population
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the population
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 of
Columbia
 was around 28
thousand
likewise
 in
Yamhill
 public was 30
thousand
. In
Washington
, residents were 75
thousand
, and
this
 district had the highest community in the three counties of Oregon. In 1970,
population
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the population
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 of
Washington
 started to
signficant
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significant
significantly
 rise
while
 the citizens of
Columbia
 and
Yamhill
 slightly
jump to
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.
To
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 2000 the
population
 of
Washington
ammounted
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amounted
 to around 241
thousand
besides
Columbia
 and
Yamhill
 whose
population
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populations
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 amounted to only approximately 76
thousand
 and 90
thousand
.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words columbia, yamhill, washington, population, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • population change
  • significant increase/decrease
  • growth rates
  • economic opportunities
  • migration patterns
  • environmental conditions
  • rapid growth/decline
  • industrial development
  • natural disasters
  • governmental policies
  • historical data
  • economic conditions
  • environmental sustainability
  • technological advancements
  • social implications
  • economic implications
  • environmental implications
  • infrastructure demands
  • natural resources
  • community life
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