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The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meats in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meats in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph gives information about the amount of food consumed
such
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 as fish, lamb, beef, and
chicken
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 in a European nation from 1979 to 2004. From an
overall
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 perspective, it is evident that the consumption of
chicken
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 experienced an upward trend,
whereas
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 a reverse pattern could be seen in the figure for the three other categories In 1979, the quantity of beef ingested was largest, at around 220
grams
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.
Chicken
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 and lamb were consumed at lower rates, with around 150
grams
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 per week per person. The amount of fish consumed,
however
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, accounted for the lowest number, at about 60
grams
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. In the following years, there was a slight decrease in the data on fish, at about 50
grams
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 in 2004. The quantity of
chicken
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 ingested rose significantly to around 250
grams
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 per week
while
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 the figure for lamb consumed dropped to a little higher than 50
grams
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 weekly. After reaching a peak of around 240
grams
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 in 1984, beef consumption gradually fell to somewhere
the
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in the
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 vicinity of 100
grams
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 in 2004.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words chicken, grams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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