the graph show the amount of money spent on books in Germany, Italy, France and Austria between 1995 and 2005

the graph show the amount of money spent on books in Germany, Italy, France and Austria between 1995 and 2005
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The line graph illustrates the expenditure on
books
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in four different nations, namely Germany, France, Italy and Austria from 1995 to 2005 From an
overall
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perspective, it is evident that the expenses on
books
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increased in all the given four countries over the years shown.
In addition
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, the figure in Germany showed the greatest increase
of
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in
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budget
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the budget
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for booking
throughout
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apply
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most of
time
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the time
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. In 1995, the amount of money that
German
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Germany
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purchased
books
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accounted for the largest, around 80
million
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dollars
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,
then
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this
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data surged to 95
million
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dollars
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in 2005.
In contrast
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, Austria spent the lowest money on buying
books
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, just 30
million
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dollars
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in 1995,
then
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showed a gradual incline to 40
million
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dollars
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in 1999 before reaching a peak at 70
million
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dollars
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in the
last
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year surveyed. Looking at France and Italy, they started in 1995 with almost 55
million
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dollars
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and 50
million
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dollars
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respectively. The expenditure
on
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in
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France rose gradually to peak in 2005
with
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at
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more than 70
million
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dollars
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,
whereas
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a reserve pattern could be seen in the data for Italy in 1999.
However
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, it surged to a high of around 62
million
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dollars
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in the end.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, million, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "surged" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • stability
  • comparison
  • influence
  • economic conditions
  • cultural factors
  • digital media
  • educational policies
  • implications
  • market growth
  • consumer behavior
  • future prediction
  • challenges
  • opportunities
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