The line graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the median monthly price up and down of
three
metals Copper,Nickel and Zinc in 2014.
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Overall
,Copper and Nickel Linking Words
prices
fell in the given period,Use synonyms
while
Zinc Linking Words
prices
went up.
On the one hand,Nickel Use synonyms
prices
started from 6% in January and significantly went down to -3% within June,which was the lowest point.After that,Use synonyms
prices
rose to minus one per cent and stayed there for the next Use synonyms
three
months.Use synonyms
Finally
, Linking Words
prices
ended the Use synonyms
year
on a positive note(1% increase),which was the lowest among all Use synonyms
three
metals.Copper started the Use synonyms
year
at 2 per cent and gradually went down to -.5% within four months,which was the lowest point.After that,it rose steadily and ended the Use synonyms
year
with an almost 2% increase rate.
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On the other hand
,Zinc Linking Words
prices
started from 1% in January,which was the lowest among all and after February significantly went down and ended June at -1%,which was the lowest point.After that,Use synonyms
prices
rose to -.5% per cent and stayed there for the next Use synonyms
three
months.Use synonyms
Finally
, Linking Words
prices
ended the Use synonyms
year
on a positive note(2% increase) which was the highest among all.Use synonyms
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