The line graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the median monthly price up and down of
three
metals Copper,Nickel and Zinc in 2014.
Overall
,Copper and Nickel prices
fell in the given period,while
Zinc prices
went up.
On the one hand,Nickel prices
started from 6% in January and significantly went down to -3% within June,which was the lowest point.After that,prices
rose to minus one per cent and stayed there for the next three
months.Finally
, prices
ended the year
on a positive note(1% increase),which was the lowest among all three
metals.Copper started the year
at 2 per cent and gradually went down to -.5% within four months,which was the lowest point.After that,it rose steadily and ended the year
with an almost 2% increase rate.
On the other hand
,Zinc prices
started from 1% in January,which was the lowest among all and after February significantly went down and ended June at -1%,which was the lowest point.After that,prices
rose to -.5% per cent and stayed there for the next three
months.Finally
, prices
ended the year
on a positive note(2% increase) which was the highest among all.Submitted by ashraftaukir on
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