THE BAR CHART BELOW GIVES INFOMATION ABOOUT THE NUMBER OF STUDENTS STUDYING COMPUTER SCIENCE AT A uk university between 2010 and 2012. Summerise the info by selecting the main features, and making comparision where relavent.

THE BAR CHART BELOW GIVES INFOMATION ABOOUT THE NUMBER OF STUDENTS STUDYING COMPUTER SCIENCE AT A uk university between 2010 and 2012. Summerise the info by selecting the main features, and making comparision where relavent.
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The given chart illustrates how many home and international
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studied a particular subject in the UK between 2010 and 2012.
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, it is evident that British
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had a superiority over those who came from overseas. Looking into details, the figure for British male
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stayed at under 40, which was twice as high as the
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of international ones in 2010. The next year, the
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of foreign and local university
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was almost the same, at around 25. There was an increase in the
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of international and home
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to almost 40 and 43, respectively in 2012. As regards the figures for females, there were small disparities in the
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of university
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who came from other countries, which was under 20 during the whole period. The
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of
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who lived in the UK was over 30, which was followed by nearly 45 in the next 2 years.
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