The graph below show information about the staff of Shore Hotel from 1975 to 2010

The graph below show information about the staff of Shore Hotel from 1975 to 2010
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The given graph indicates the data about the percentage of hotel
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who categorized by various qualifications in between 1975 and 2010.
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, it is evident from the table that people who had ability that could speak two or more languages came at the top of the list the percentage of 79 in 2010
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5% of hotel workers experienced language qualifications in 1975. Looking at the details, who had previous a job experience the proportion of 78% of them reported the highest share in 1985
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45%
staff
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ranked the lowest place among given all years.
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, workers who had language preferences, not only in 1995 but
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in 2005 accounted for the same portion of the
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merely at 21%.
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, those who were multilingual in the
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and had job stages, both of them followed the same pattern and share as the percentage of simply 50%.
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