Describe your home
When you write, you can mention the following:
Where is it
Different kinds of rooms
Details of each room
Choose the below set of words while writing the essay.
Bedroom, Bathroom, Living Room, Hall, Kitchen, Toilet, Basement, Lift,
Garden, Study, Dining Table, Wardrobe, Cupboard, Sofa, Bookcase, Shower, Dishwasher, Washing Machine.
ご
attached with a small guest room. But our kitchen is outside of
house
Add an article
the house
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. There is a front yard. But
me
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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and my brother
sharing
Change the form of the verb
shared
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a room in my
house
in my room we have
small
Correct article usage
a small
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study table where both
studying
Replace the word
study
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.
However
Add a comma
However,
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in the
lobby
Add a comma
lobby,
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there is one pair of sofa and a glass table.on more things in the lobby there
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
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two wind near the television
also
book stand too.
Therefore
a small place
Also
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Task Achievement
Begin with a clear introduction that sets the context for your essay. Start by stating what you will describe (your home) and possibly why it is special to you. This helps set a clear direction for your essay.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use clear and logical structure in your writing. Organize your essay into paragraphs, each focused on a specific area (e.g., introduction, each different room, and conclusion). This will help make your description easier to follow.
Task Achievement
In your conclusion, summarize the main aspects of your home that you have described. You don't have to introduce new information here, just wrap up what you've already mentioned in a concise way.
Coherence and Cohesion
Be consistent with your tenses. If you're describing your home as it is now, stick to the present tense throughout your essay. This will help maintain clarity and coherence in your writing.
Coherence and Cohesion
Try to vary your sentence structure and use a variety of vocabulary related to describing homes. This will make your essay more engaging and demonstrate a higher level of English proficiency.
Task Achievement
To enhance task achievement, include more detailed descriptions of each room and how you use them. Mentioning specific features or furnishings (like the study table in your room) is good, but try to expand on these points for a more complete response.
Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
There is an ongoing debate regarding paying taxes. While some people argue that they should possess all the money they earn without paying taxes to the government, I believe that citizens should pay taxes considering the benefits of society. This essay will discuss my opinion in detail with relevant examples.
Historical buildings are well known for their own cultural and architectural significance. It is believed by the masses that the preservation of old buildings is more significant than new ones. I completely agree with this point of view and in this essay, I will support my opinion with examples.
Over a decade now, technology has improved progressively and effectively. While some people argue that the people around the globe are getting separated from each other, I would strongly agree with the notion of technology acting as the communication medium all around.
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