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The pie charts show the revenue source for U.S. highways for last year and U.S. highway expenditure by type for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relecant.

The pie charts show the revenue source for U.S. highways for last year and U.S. highway expenditure by type for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relecant.
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The pie chart illustrates the profit source for
the
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several highway expenditures by
last
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 year in the U.S. It is noticeable that the highest
revenue
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 source comes from motor fuel Taxes.
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, The lowest income for the US
revenue
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 by tolls in one year ago. In the US, the Numbers Of income
comes
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 from
Motor-Fuel
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the Motor-Fuel
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 Taxes type which is a fourth of the total
revenue
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 source.
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, the highest incomes which are more than 20% are General funds and others are 23.4% and 20.3%, respectively. In terms Of
revenue
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 sources from highway types, the tolls have lower
revenue
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 than others which is only 6.2% of total profit sources.
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, the bonds and motor-vehicle Taxes which are close to 10% reach 12.1% and 13%, respectively.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words revenue with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • revenue sources
  • expenditure
  • proportions
  • significant disparities
  • maintenance
  • expansion
  • administration
  • safety improvements
  • correlated
  • mismatches
  • aligned categories
  • efficiency
  • priorities
  • budgeting
  • sustainability
  • infrastructure
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