The graph below shows the proportion of types of magazines sold by the company in 1975, 1995 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and Reporting the main features then make comparisons were relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of types of magazines sold by the company in 1975, 1995 and 2015.

Summarize the information by selecting and Reporting the main features then make comparisons were relevant.
The bar chart below illustrates the information about newspapers sold by a company from 1975 to 2015.
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, sports was the most popular type of magazine in
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company the opposite was seen in the food
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magazines
. Sports was the most popular type of magazine in
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company with nearly 45% in 2015, which was 10% more than ones in 1975 followed by 35% of sales in 1995. In comparison with fashion, the percentage of
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kind of magazine in 2015 was only 5%, which was 18% less than
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in 1975, and
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figure in 1995 was 15%. In food journals, the rate of sales in 1995 was the highest at 23%,
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that these figures in 1975 and 2015 shared the same level at 10%.
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, the percentage of other types was 33%, which
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% more than the rate in 1975 and 2015. The percentage of Health journals
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25% in 1974
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and 20% in 1995,2015
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