The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The two diagrams indicate the town layout of Ryemouth and how it has changed from 1995 and the present day.
Overall
, it is evident that the village has undergone several developments
along with
improvements to convenient facilities for residents which includes the construction of a new car
park
, and restaurants. Before the development, the layout of the city seems very undeveloped for people.
Firstly
, the most noticeable of the town is the farmland, which is located northeast part of the map and
it was
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attached to the forest
park
.
Also
, there is a hotel and a cafe near
near
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the
park
.
In addition
, southern part of the map, there was a fishing port and fishing market situated in front of the sea.
Moreover
, there were a lot of housing and shops near the road. By looking at the second diagram,
it is clear that
golf and tennis courts are made where farmland and forest
park
used to be.
Secondly
, the shop is replaced with new restaurants and the fish market is altered into
supermarket
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the supermarket
a supermarket
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.
Furthermore
, near the hotel and cafe, a car
park
is made.
Last
but not least, the street expanded and built new houses.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • village
  • Ryemouth
  • 1995
  • present
  • houses
  • small school
  • residential areas
  • amenities
  • population
  • increased
  • growth
  • expansion
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