Children are now facing educational, social, and commercial pressure. What are the causes of these pressures? What measures can be taken to reduce them?

The

rising

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of

internet

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the internet

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and social

media

has

bring

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significant effects not only on adults but

also

on

children

. It

lead

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them to have to deal with

pressures

in education, social, and commercial

since

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from

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an early age. One of the main causes of the problem above is

because

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because of

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parent’s

expectation

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expectations

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.

Parents

nowadays

spent

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many of their hours on social

media

and

exposed

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are exposed

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to

contents

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content

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that

are glorifying

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glorifies

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some

children

’s excellent achievements,

such

us

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as

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: always

get

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getting

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straight

A

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, winning math

competition

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competitions

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, and playing instruments.

These

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had

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has

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led

parents

to

rise

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their

expectation

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expectations

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on

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of

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their own

children

, hoping that the

children

would

also

be able to do the same, which could

then

be something they can upload on their social

media

. The possible way to resolve

this

issue must come from the

parents

themselves; there should be

a

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clarity from the

parents

to decide what contents they consume, a wise judgement to differentiate which expectations are achievable by their

children

and which are unrealistic, and more importantly, allowing their

children

to enjoy their childhood. Another causes of why

children

have to deal with so many

pressures

is because

the

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exposure of social

media

since they are young.

Children

, especially those in their teenage

year

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years

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, have the tendency

of wanting

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to want

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to be famous or

well known

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in

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on

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the

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social

media

and

being

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be

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followed by many people.

This

required

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requires

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them to be able to make many friends,

attending

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any

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social events, follow trends,

even

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and even

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wearing

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any specific brand,which will help them to have

many

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contents

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content

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to be viewed as ‘popular

kid

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kids

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’ on social

media

as well as

getting

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get

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more followers, and give them some sense of pride.

This

problem could be addressed by the

parents

sorting out what type of content

children

consume, limiting the maximum hours a child can

spent

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spend

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on the

internet

daily, and

being

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creating

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a safe space for their

children

to talk about anything that bothers them

especially

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, especially

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in their social life.

To sum up

, nowadays

children

are facing many

pressures

in education, social, and commercial

due to

the

increase

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increased

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usage of

internet

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the internet

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by both

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children

and

the

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parents

. The key

of

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to

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tackling

such

pressures

is on the

parents

;

by letting

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to let

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their

children

to

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apply

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be

children

,

providing

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a safe environment

as well as

being a safe place for the

children

,

guiding

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guide

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their

children

when using the

internet

, and

limiting

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limit

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the hours spent on the

internet

.