The given bar chart illustrates the ratio of household who lived in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

The given bar chart illustrates the ratio of household who lived in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
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The bar chart provides information about the percentage of
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who either possessed or rented accommodation from 1918 to 2011.
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the percentage of families who rented the house witnessed a downturn trend , the corresponding ratio for ownership experienced an upward trend.
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in 1918 the number of households owning housing commenced at approximately 20 per
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and boomed by 10 % in 1939 from 20 to 30 . In 1953 the number of people responsible for ordinary remained steady followed by a remarkable rise of 40 per
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in 1961. Having increased , the figure reached 70 % in 1991 and maintained its level. Families who rented houses started at 75 per
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in 1918 and dropped significantly to 60 % in 1961. In 1971 the figures for both rented and possessed ordinary were the same. In 1991 people who rented homes decreased considerably to 30 per
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and maintained the same position till 2011.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • homeownership rates
  • economic factors
  • recessions
  • inflation
  • generational changes
  • housing market evolution
  • post-war periods
  • demographic shifts
  • technological advancements
  • urban development
  • housing policies
  • housing preferences
  • housing demands
  • accessibility
  • accommodation
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