You recently took a plane to a holiday in a foreign city, and on arrival you found that your luaggage was lost. You did not receive your luggage untill the last day of your holiday. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: 1. complain about the situation. 2. Say why it caused you problem. 3. seek suitable compensation.
Dear Sir ,
I am writing
this
letter to express my deep grievances about the baggage service provided by your airline. I booked the tickets through your website to fly from India to Canada on 25th
of March.
My journey was amazing because the staff was co-operative and professional Correct article usage
the 25th
however
,
when I reached to collect my luggage , I came to know that was lost Remove the comma
apply
due to
the negligence of your employees. I was waiting in the long queue to fill a
form in order to provide concise information about my bags Change preposition
out a
thus
, the receptionist promised me to get my stuff within two days .
Now , Correct pronoun usage
it
its
has been a month ,Correct pronoun usage
it
Correct word choice
and I
I
Correct word choice
and I
didn't
Verb problem
haven't
get
my luggage Replace the word
got
Correct word choice
and as
as
a result, my Correct word choice
and as
overall
experience was bad with your well-known airline. On my trip , I had no clothes, shoes and other miscellaneous items with me which makes
Wrong verb form
made
my
comfortable. Correct pronoun usage
me
Moreover
, this
inconvenience caused by your company ruined my holidays . Thus
, I request you to give me 80
% discount on my travel package asCorrect article usage
an 80
a
compensation.
I am looking forward to hearing from you .
Remove the article
apply
Correct the word
Yours
Your
faithfully ,
JaiCorrect your spelling
Yours
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greeting and closing
Begin the letter with a more formal greeting, such as 'Dear Sir/Madam', since you are addressing an unknown individual at the airline.
logical structure
Enhance the logical structure by organizing the content more clearly. Consider using separate paragraphs for the description of the issue, the impact it had on you, and your request for compensation, to improve readability.
suitable writing tone
Maintain a consistent tone throughout. While the tone is mostly suitable, ensuring formality in language and avoiding casual phrases can make your letter more professional.
complete response
For a higher completeness of response, detail more about how the lack of luggage specifically affected your holiday plans and experiences. This will strengthen your argument for compensation.
single idea per paragraph
To improve cohesion, consider using linking words or phrases to connect your ideas more smoothly between sentences and paragraphs.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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