The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table reveals data about the underground
railway
systems in 6 major cities relating to the data opened,
kilometres
of route and
passengers
per year.
Overall
, what stands out from the table is that Tokyo accounts for the highest proportion of
passengers
during the year. The oldest
railway
system is
London
which is
also
the longest among the others. Moving into a more detailed analysis, it is obvious that in most cities
railway
systems were opened in the 1900s with the exception of
London
and Los Angeles (in 1863 and 2001 respectively). The length of Kyoto and Los Angeles formed very little share of the total, 11 and 28
kilometres
in turn. There is a little margin between Tokyo's and Washington DC'c routes, as the former is accountable for 155 km, and the latter is less than it by 29 km. The longest
railway
system built in
London
was 394
kilometres
, whose figure was twice as high as that of Paris, 199
kilometres
. In terms of
passengers
, Paris and Tokyo were the busiest railways with a share of more than 1 thousand. The third was
London
which was merely 775 km.
Consequently
, Kyoto and Los Angeles had the lowest contributions (45 and 50 respectively). At
last
, Washington's
passengers
comprised of the total by only 144 people
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