The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement- making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The two different two diagrams illustrate all the steps for making
cement
and another one is the concrete production process.
Looking at the overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that cement
production is divided into a total of 5 steps. After that, the cement
is made into concrete by mixing diverse things.
First of all, Limestone and Clay are crushed by the crusher so, it become powder. After that, the mixed powder is passed by a mixer and goes to a rotating heater to be evenly heated by fire. Next,
the Heated powder is then
undergone grind. Finally
, the cement
came out and they were packaged in bags.
After
this
process, some cement
are
used to make concrete. There are diverse raw materials mixed in the blender bucket. There Change the verb form
is
are
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is
cement
power, 10% of water, sand contained 25% and, half of
Change preposition
apply
gravel
. The Add an article
the gravel
last
stage is that they became concrete for using diverse ways.Submitted by wowoo04066 on
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