The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

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The line graph illustrates the usage of energy by six fuels in the UAS from 1980 to the projections of 2030 in a 2008 report. Units have been measured in
quadrillions
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. In the first place, the
consumption
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of energy by petrol and oil began with 35
quadrillions
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in 1980, increasing to nearly 40
quadrillions
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in 2008. And it is projected to continuously incline to about 50
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.
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, using coal and natural gas has been followed by it, having a similar upward over the period. The
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of coal (approximately 17
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) was lower than natural gas at the beginning,
while
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in 2008, the use of both reached equally at about 23
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. Interestingly, coal used is forecast to be nearly 30
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, outweighing the natural gas consumed in 2030. Of the remaining energy, nuclear is always used mostly,
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the use of three was approximately 3
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in 1980.
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, nuclear
consumption
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has kept steadily rising to about 8
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in 2008 and is forecast to 11
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in 2030. As for the
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of solar/wind and hydropower, they have displayed similar trends increasing to 6
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in 2008.
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, using solar/wind (8
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) is projected to surpass that of hydropower in 2030.
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, the six fuels consumed all have shown upward trends between 1980 and 2008
as well as
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in the future.
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, the usage of petrol and oil always ranks first whether in the past or the future.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words quadrillions, consumption with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Energy consumption
  • Renewable resources
  • Non-renewable resources
  • Fossil fuels
  • Nuclear power
  • Hydroelectric power
  • Solar energy
  • Wind energy
  • Biomass
  • Consumption patterns
  • Technological advancements
  • Energy efficiency
  • Sustainable development
  • Carbon footprint
  • Energy policy
  • Projections
  • Decade
  • Significant shifts
  • Economic factors
  • Environmental impact
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