Some people argue that if children behave badly they parent should accept responsibility for the behaviour of children. Do you agree or disagree.

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parents
should be the
one
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who
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responsible if their
children
are
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behave badly. I state my position on the agree side because of the following reasons.
First,
it is already their nature to accept responsibility, since their
children
's bad attitudes
subliminally
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the reflection of their
parents
' wrongdoings.
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in
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their childhood
period deem
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to conform
their
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closest bystanders. In
this
case, if
children
are judged to have a high intimacy with their
parents
, it can be said that their
parents
will be a good exemplification for them to behave in certain ways.
For example
, recent research by psychological students
in
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Minnessota
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Minnesota
University successfully revealed that 87% of their toddler subjects were likely to follow the exposed attitudes of their
parents
. Specifically, the research unveiled that
parents
who
drug
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, drink alcohol, and smoke, were potentially followed by their
offsprings
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, and those actions will
preserve
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until their adulthood period. The research result subliminally indicates that
parents
are the
frontliner
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who
responsible
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are responsible
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for the construction of their
children
's acts;
thus
, it is acceptable to say that they should be the
one
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ones
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who take responsibility when their
offsprings
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behave badly.
Furthermore
, the act of acceptance can be an effective
way
to discipline
children
. By reflecting upon their wrongdoings, they will have
a
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room to learn
differentiate
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between good and bad, which later will help
children
to develop their good character. An experimental
reserach
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research
from Sheffield University has confirmed that the experiment group
parents
, who gladly take their
children
's bad attitudes, will end up
to have
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more interaction with and
give
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advice to their
children
about good and bad behaviours.
Additionally
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the final comparison encapsulated that in the later period,
children
with
parents
from the experiment group were likely to behave in a good
way
compared to
the
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counterparts.
To conclude
, I agree with the
believe
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that
parents
should gladly accept if their
children
behave in a wrong
way
because the exposed wrongdoings may come from the conformity of
parents
' bad attitude and it can be an effective
way
to discipline
children
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • upbringing
  • environment
  • instilling
  • moral values
  • discipline
  • influence
  • negate
  • individuality
  • act out
  • external factors
  • peer influence
  • broader societal issues
  • solely
  • community
  • social institutions
  • overly accountable
  • stress
  • unfair blame
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