More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people suggest that the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modern world, obesity
became
the number one concern in health news. The common cause of itWrong verb form
has become
,
is the growth of Remove the comma
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fast
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the fast
food
industry.
To begin
with, the price of junk food
leads to huge accessibility of it. More and more people make this
choice instead
of the traditional meal. Nowadays, many of us lack free time and to be honest, we choose to spend our leisure with company or alone, that is
why cooking can be not suitable for everyone. Also
, with busy
schedule, people intend to order feed, which doesn't take a lot of time to prepare.
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For example
, we should take a look at the Americans, some of them eat convenience food
on a regular basis. Due to
their foodstuff contains a bunch of added sugar and unhealthy fats, people start to gain more weight. This
becomes a serious issue for them and causes diseases related to health.
The solution consists in removing such
cuisine from ration
, including daily activity and drinking a gallon of water. Of course, if you are overweight, you Add an article
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this
problem.
On the other hand
, healthy meals are more expensive. Because of their quality, shop owners set higher prices, than of the precooked food
. For instance
, in Austria
customers prefer to buy fresh produce Add a comma
Austria,
such
as vegetables or fruits, although
they also
choose frozen meals as an addition. The Austrians don't cook much, but this
simple balance keeps them healthy and fit.
In conclusion, I would say that,
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increasing the price of fattening foods can be one of the Correct article usage
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the
obesity, but it is not the only one.Correct article usage
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