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became
the number one concern in health news. The common cause of itWrong verb form
has become
,
is the growth of Remove the comma
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fast
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the fast
food
industry.
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To begin
with, the price of junk Linking Words
food
leads to huge accessibility of it. More and more people make Use synonyms
this
choice Linking Words
instead
of the traditional meal. Nowadays, many of us lack free time and to be honest, we choose to spend our leisure with company or alone, Linking Words
that is
why cooking can be not suitable for everyone. Linking Words
Also
, with Linking Words
busy
schedule, people intend to order feed, which doesn't take a lot of time to prepare.
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a busy
For example
, we should take a look at the Americans, some of them eat convenience Linking Words
food
on a regular basis. Use synonyms
Due to
their foodstuff contains a bunch of added sugar and unhealthy fats, people start to gain more weight. Linking Words
This
becomes a serious issue for them and causes diseases related to health.
The solution consists in removing Linking Words
such
cuisine from Linking Words
ration
, including daily activity and drinking a gallon of water. Of course, if you are overweight, you Add an article
the ration
are
should consider going to the doctor and taking Unnecessary verb
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actions
against Fix the agreement mistake
action
this
problem.
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On the other hand
, healthy meals are more expensive. Because of their quality, shop owners set higher prices, than of the precooked Linking Words
food
. Use synonyms
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, in Linking Words
Austria
customers prefer to buy fresh produce Add a comma
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such
as vegetables or fruits, Linking Words
although
they Linking Words
also
choose frozen meals as an addition. The Austrians don't cook much, but Linking Words
this
simple balance keeps them healthy and fit.
In conclusion, I would say thatLinking Words
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the
increasing the price of fattening foods can be one of the Correct article usage
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solution
to Change to a plural noun
solutions
the
obesity, but it is not the only one.Correct article usage
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