A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before. say where you went, where you stayed, what you can do there and what the food was like.

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Dear penny： I hope

you

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everything is great, I found

the

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some places to recommend for you. But I think the

BeiJing

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Beijing

is the best. I went to

BeiJing

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Beijing

, China, two months ago. It

omly

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only

takes three hours from where you live, if you take

plane

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a plane

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.We stayed in a very huge and pretty hotel called WANGFU Hotel, you can search it online, and

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, I really liked

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the foods

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foods

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of the hotel, there was many good food from different countries,

moreover

, the quality is fresh too. There are many things to do, you can go to the Palace Museum and the Great Wall,

also

, there are more

anicent

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ancient

buildings and new modern buildings, my

favorite

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place is a history museum where I learned some fun knowledge about

this

country, it is interesting to me, and I think you can enjoy it. By the way, I really have to mention the great snacks there, you can try to have a TANGHULU, and you will love it very much. If you have any questions, please send E-mail to me. Best Max

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Greeting and Closing

Remember to use a more formal and friendly salutation and closing in your letter, as it's directed to a friend. For instance, you could start with 'Dear Penny,' and conclude with 'Best regards' or 'Warmly' followed by your name.

Logical Structure

Organize your ideas more clearly into separate paragraphs; one for the introduction, one or more paragraphs detailing your recommendations, and a concluding paragraph. This will enhance the letter's clarity and readability.

Coherence & Cohesion

To further improve coherence and cohesion, consider using transition words or phrases to connect your ideas better between sentences and paragraphs. This creates a smoother reading experience.

Complete Response

To fully address the task, try to include more specific examples and personal experiences related to the place you're recommending. For instance, share a memorable story or describe a particular restaurant or dish in more detail.

Writing Tone

Maintain a consistent and suitable tone throughout the letter. While it's informal, ensuring it remains respectful and considerate will make your recommendation feel more genuine and thoughtful.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

178 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

picturesque
breathtaking
culturally rich
accommodations
amenities
local cuisine
adventure sports
historical sites
memorable experience
quaint
authentic
scenic views
hospitality
serenity
bustling markets
authentic dining experience
pristine
local delicacies
vibrant
tranquil

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The Closing

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