In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?
It is evident that there are more and more
people
tending to learn more about their houses’ history
. Lacking money
and the increase in the old population may contribute to this
and I think they can know the story by reading books
.
People
who need money
may be interested in the history
of their houses because the house
with a good story is more expensive than the one which has no history
. Nowadays even every country does not have an excellent economy and this
causes a money
shortage for people
. Part of them then
decide to sell their house
to pass the tough time
. It is believed that customers are projected to pay more for a historical building, so people
try to find stories about houses they are living in. For example
, a flat which used to be visited by a star will be worth more money
than a normal one.
The growth of the elderly is also
considered as a reason because the elderly are likely to have more spare time
. Some of them may be attracted by the history
of their houses. old people
do not need to work and have lots of time
to do the things they are interested in. Part of them are willing to find out about history
and start by their own house
, just like the one who tends to have a grasp of writing. If people
are young and have to work for a long time
, they are not expected to have enough time
to enjoy themselves.
In my opinion, a useful way of researching history
is reading books
such
as a history
book or one’s diary. Books
can contain the information that human beings lose or forget. Therefore
, reading books
is a good method to find the history
of something and we can usually find the things we want. For instance
, we may know a president used to live in this
house
by searching messages in a diary.
To sum up
, the increasing number of people
who are interested in the history
of their house
is because people
want to get money
and more people
who do not need to work join the team. Reading books
can help people
achieve their goalsSubmitted by 2578922328 on
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