the charts show information about the percentage of men and women age 60-64 who were eployed in four countries in 1970 ad 2000
The bar charts illustrate the ratio of males and females with the age between 60 to 64 who still worked in
Belgium
, USA, Japan, and Indonesia from 1970 to 2000.
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Overall
, the total number of workers (both male and female) aged 60-64 decreased dramatically from 1970 to 2000. Linking Words
Furthermore
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it is clear that
the ratio of women who still worked in their 60s Linking Words
were
lower than men in any country between 1970 and 2000, especially Change the verb form
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Belgium
in 2000.
The proportion of female workers with age Use synonyms
of
60-64 in Change preposition
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Belgium
started around 62% and decreased dramatically to just below 8% in 2000. Use synonyms
Similar
event happened in Add an article
A similar
USA
where it started at around 78% and dropped significantly to about 41% in 2000. Correct article usage
the USA
On the other hand
, Japan and Indonesia only experienced a slight decline of about 10% from 1970 to 2000.
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In addition
, the charts witnessed a noticeable increase in the gap between men and women aged 60-64 who still have occupation from 1970 to 2000 in Linking Words
Belgium
and Use synonyms
USA
with approximately 28% and 15% gap difference, respectively. Correct article usage
the USA
In contrast
, Japan reduced its gap difference by 15%, whilst Indonesia remained relatively steady at around 20% between 1970 and 2000.Linking Words
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