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the charts show information about the percentage of men and women age 60-64 who were eployed in four countries in 1970 ad 2000

the charts show information about the percentage of men and women age 60-64 who were eployed in four countries in 1970 ad 2000
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The bar charts illustrate the ratio of males and females with the age between 60 to 64 who still worked in
Belgium
, USA, Japan, and Indonesia from 1970 to 2000.
Overall
, the total number of workers (both male and female) aged 60-64 decreased dramatically from 1970 to 2000.
Furthermore
,
it is clear that
 the ratio of women who still worked in their 60s
were
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 lower than men in any country between 1970 and 2000, especially
Belgium
 in 2000. The proportion of female workers with age
of
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60-64 in
Belgium
 started around 62% and decreased dramatically to just below 8% in 2000.
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 event happened in
USA
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 where it started at around 78% and dropped significantly to about 41% in 2000.
On the other hand
, Japan and Indonesia only experienced a slight decline of about 10% from 1970 to 2000.
In addition
, the charts witnessed a noticeable increase in the gap between men and women aged 60-64 who still have occupation from 1970 to 2000 in
Belgium
 and
USA
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 with approximately 28% and 15% gap difference, respectively.
In contrast
, Japan reduced its gap difference by 15%, whilst Indonesia remained relatively steady at around 20% between 1970 and 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words belgium with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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