The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tons) in six different countries over a twenty-year period.

The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tons) in six different countries over a twenty-year period.
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The table gives data about the amounts of
waste
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materials produced by some particular countries, over a 20-year period between 1980 and 2000. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it can be clearly seen that there were significant upward trends in five countries,
whereas
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Korea witnessed a decline during the period. Looking into detail, the amount of
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output in Ireland soared from 0.6
million
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to 5
million
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. Meanwhile, Japan’s
waste
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materials increased dramatically from 28
million
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to 53
million
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. The figure for Korea underwent a fluctuation, jumping to 31
million
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in 1990 and declining to 19
million
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in 2000.
In contrast
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, there was a slight rise in the
waste
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produced by Poland from 4
million
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to 6.6
million
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. The
amounts
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of
waste
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materials in Portugal increased marginally to 5
million
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like
Poland
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in Poland
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. The production of
waste
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in Japan decreased significantly from 31
million
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to 19
million
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over a 20-year period.
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