Nowadays, most
people
need to work hard and stressful
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,
such
as accounting and waitressing.
Therefore
, some
people
think that
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people
think that
unemployment
is more good to individuals rather
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workWrong verb form
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in
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job. I totally disagree with stopping hard
jobs
and
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without working.
To begin
with, the prominent reason why
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impact
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people
is that it leads
people
to
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in their careers. As a matter of fact
that Correct word choice
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people
cannot achieve
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if they avoid
from Change preposition
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difficulties namely hard and annoying
jobs
.
For example
, 75% of young
people
in Turkey experienced an unsuccessful story with resigning
theirChange preposition
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affordable
jobs
. They were not able to find
an easy and comfortable Correct the article-noun agreement
an easy and comfortable job
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jobs
.
As a result
, they could not obtain an achievement in their career life.
Another negative effect of resigning annoying
jobs
and living without working is that it is
due to
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increaseWrong verb form
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economic crisis in a country.
This
is because
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rate is a very fundamental factor for measuring
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situation.
Hence
, if it
growthReplace the word
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in a state, the economic crisis would increase.
For example
, in 2020,
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rate
was Unnecessary verb
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increased by resigning
people
from their
difficultiesReplace the word
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occupations in Egypt.
Consequently
, the country had a decline in economy.
In conclusion,
although
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is entertainment,
it has more potential drawbacks.
ReasonsCorrect article usage
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mentioned above
supportsChange the verb form
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to
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in any
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is more helpful to employers by avoiding from unsuccessful life in the career and influencing to economic crisis.