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The diagram below shows the process forrecycling plastic bottles.Summarise theinformation by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows the process forrecycling plastic bottles.Summarise theinformation by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant
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Plastic
bottles
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 are one of the most materials used in the world, and recycling is a really important subject to try to minimize
the
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apply
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waste
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. Around the streets, in front
off
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of
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 houses and restaurants is possible to see some bins, to collect organic and
recycle
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recycled
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waste
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. The yellow in is the correct one to trash recycle things,
such
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 as plastic
bottles
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. After trashed, a truck collects at least once a week and
leave
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leaves
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 in a specific place to separate what is
recycleble
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recyclable
 and what is not. For that reason, is really important to separate before trash,
this
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 means someone will not spend
to
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too
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many
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much
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 time separating. Recycling is a big process, after
separated
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separating
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 the
waste
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 should be
compressing
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compressed
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 in blocks to
facilitat
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facilitate
 the crushing and washing process, that should be done because
to
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too
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many
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much
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durty
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dirty
 come with the
bottles
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 and crushing it makes
easier
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it easier
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 to produce
a
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apply
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new material. Crushed, washed and
then
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 going to the production of plastic pellets, it
is
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can be
finally
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 heated to form a raw material. But what can be produced using recycled
bottles
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? New
bottles
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, containers, bags, T-shirts,
pen
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pens
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, toys and
to
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too
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 many other things.
Searching
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By searching
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, it is possible to see how big is the
waste
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 problem around the world and how not
to
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too
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 many
govermnents
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governments
government
invests
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invest
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 in
this
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 situation. Starting
into
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in
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 the houses, avoiding to use
plastics
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of plastics
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 in excess and separating the correct things in the correct bins, is a good
way
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ways
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 to keep the environment safe.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Change the first paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bottles, waste with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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