WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the process forrecycling plastic bottles.Summarise theinformation by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words.
Plastic
bottles
are one of the most materials used in the world, and recycling is a really important subject to try to minimize the
Correct article usage
apply
waste
.
Around the streets, in front off
houses and restaurants is possible to see some bins, to collect organic and Replace the word
of
recycle
Wrong verb form
recycled
waste
. The yellow in is the correct one to trash recycle things, such
as plastic bottles
. After trashed, a truck collects at least once a week and leave
in a specific place to separate what is Correct subject-verb agreement
leaves
recycleble
and what is not. For that reason, is really important to separate before trash, Correct your spelling
recyclable
this
means someone will not spend to
Replace the word
too
many
time separating.
Recycling is a big process, after Correct quantifier usage
much
separated
the Wrong verb form
separating
waste
should be compressing
in blocks to Wrong verb form
compressed
facilitat
the crushing and washing process, that should be done because Correct your spelling
facilitate
to
Replace the word
too
many
Correct quantifier usage
much
durty
come with the Correct your spelling
dirty
bottles
and crushing it makes easier
to produce Correct pronoun usage
it easier
a
new material.
Crushed, washed and Remove the article
apply
then
going to the production of plastic pellets, it is
can be Unnecessary verb
apply
finally
heated to form a raw material.
But what can be produced using recycled bottles
? New bottles
, containers, bags, T-shirts, pen
, toys and Fix the agreement mistake
pens
to
many other things.
Replace the word
too
Searching
, it is possible to see how big is the Change preposition
By searching
waste
problem around the world and how not to
many Replace the word
too
govermnents
Correct your spelling
governments
government
invests
in Correct subject-verb agreement
invest
this
situation. Starting into
the houses, avoiding to use Change preposition
in
plastics
in excess and separating the correct things in the correct bins, is a good Change preposition
of plastics
way
to keep the environment safe.Fix the agreement mistake
ways
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