The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates
that
how frequently Correct word choice
apply
people
in the USA ate in fast food
restaurants between Add an article
the year
a year
year
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years
of
2003, 2006 and 2013. There are 6 categories represented: eating Change preposition
apply
everyday
, several times a Replace the word
every day
week
, once a week
, once or twice a month, a few times a year
, and never.
In 2003, the highest percentage
of frequency
of eating fast food
is almost 30%, and people
eating
fast Wrong verb form
eat
food
once a week
. Besides
, eating everyday
shows the lowest Replace the word
every day
percentage
, which is at under 5%, and it is similar to percentage
of Add an article
the percentage
people
who never ate fast food
, which at
5%.
In 2006, the Add a missing verb
is at
percentage
of frequency
that people
who eating
fast Change the form of the verb
eat
food
once a week
, over 30%, is the highest number. On the other hand
, both the lowest and another lowest percentage
of people
who ate fast food
everyday
, and never ate them show under 5%.
In 2013, unlike Replace the word
every day
Change the article
the year
year
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years
of
2003 and 2006, the highest Change preposition
apply
percentage
of frequency
eating at fast food
restaurants is that eating fast food
once or twice a month. Besides
, the lowest percentage
of frequency
is same
as Correct article usage
the same
Add an article
the year
a year
year
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years
of
2003 and 2006.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, people
who ate in fast food
restaurant
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restaurants
tend
to increase between 2003 and 2006. Wrong verb form
tended
However
, the data suggest that people
were inclined to reduce absorb
fast Verb problem
the consumption of
food
in 2013. This
assumes that people
realized
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realise
that
the increasing importance of Correct word choice
apply
taking
healthy foods.Verb problem
eating
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