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The table shows forested land in million of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows forested land in million of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table below gives information about the
numbers
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number
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 of hectares
forested
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of forested
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 zone of six continents in 1990, 2000 and 2005.
It is clear that
 there were different
trend
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 in two types.
Whereas
 Africa, North
America
, Oceania and South
America
 show a decrease, Asia
along with
 Europe had a considerable increase. In a
decline
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 group, in 1990, the range of forested land in Africa, North
America
, Oceania and South
America
were
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 launched at 749, 708, 199 and 946 respectively. In the next 10 years,
while
 Africa and South
America
 illustrated a
dramatically
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 drop and
peak
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 at 691 and 882 in 2005 later, North
America
 and Oceania just reduced small when the
gigures
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figures
 reached
at
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705 and 197 respectively in 2005. In a growth group, the forested land of Europe was the highest in all continents with 989
millions
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of
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hectares and in Asia was 576. In 2000,
the
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 similar pattern
was
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 not
occuerd
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occur
 in
both
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,
while
 Europe rose
from
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to 998 and continued
jumped
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 to 1001
millions
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million
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of
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hectares in
last
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 years of research, in Asia there was a stedily decrease before soaring again
at
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 584 in 2005.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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