The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%).

The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%).
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The given graph indicates the data about the most reported drawbacks by residents who settled in the UK megapolises in 2008.
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it is clear that
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the preference for Belfast had the highest share above 50% in not only health services but
also
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education and training,
while
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Manchester came at the top of the list between 10% and 20% among other cities in 2008. Looking at the details, the indicator of Cardiff in health services ranked approximately
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60%,
whereas
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Newcastle followed a distinct pattern and shared the lowest amount
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air pollution nearly 5%.
Moreover
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, both Birmingham and London share the same pattern and their rates altered between 50% and 60% in not only health services but
also
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education and training at the same time
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • affordable housing
  • urban areas
  • overcrowding
  • homelessness
  • traffic congestion
  • car ownership
  • public transportation systems
  • commuting times
  • air pollution
  • industrial activities
  • air quality
  • green spaces
  • urbanization
  • mental health
  • crime rates
  • socio-economic factors
  • sense of security
  • waste management
  • waste disposal
  • recycling
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