Some people are of the opinion that long prison sentence reduces crime rate, while other believe other alternatives should be explored. Discuss birth views and give your opinion.

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crime

percentage

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think that it should be explored in other alternatives. In the following paragraph, both

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of

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will be discussed in detail before the conclusion

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. Nowadays,

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crime

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much more happening in many countries and it

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difficultly

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stop and help

people

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crime

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real life, it

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people

who need to

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an event

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myself

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as a result

of the long

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may help reduce the proportion of bad

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criminal

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in the cities, a chance of

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.

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long

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might not help to

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crime

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when

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criminal

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left from

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jail, they might

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bad things

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other

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again

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find the solution for

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and

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the problem that

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gorverment

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olded

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for resolved

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and

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an attitude in each person. Summarized, the best

alternatives

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is

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gorvernment

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government

should be

helpped

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helped

and interested in the enormous problem in the country. Summarized, the best alternative is the

gorvernment

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government

should be helped and interested in the enormous problem that incurred in the country.