The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in a country in two years.
The given diagrams illustrate a comparison analysis of shares of power sources in a notion in the two periods of time, 1995 and 2005.
What stands out from the charts is that the use of gas, petrol and coal was spread widely,
whereas
other categories had a reverse pattern.
In 1995, the volume of consumption products such
as gas, petrol and coal was almost similar, with 29.3%, 29.27% and 29.80%, respectively. However
, nuclear and other varieties ranked last
, accordingly
for 6.40% and 4.90% at the same time.
Shifting to the second chart, It could be seen that the three energy products stayed at the leading places. Furthermore
, despite of
that rates of using Petro went down to 19,55%, as for the rest, benchmarks of gas and coal increased slightly, making up 30,31% and 30,93%. The less used produces Change preposition
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likewise
were nuclear and other, moreover
there were somewhat raising, with 10.10% and 9.10%.Add a comma
moreover,
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