The bar chart below describes some changes in the percentage of people who were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and towns between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below describes some changes in the percentage of people who were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and towns between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts depict data about
people
born inside and outside of
Australia
divided by regions, including towns,
cities
and rural areas in 1995 and 2010, respectively.
Overall
,
rate
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the rate
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of natality was higher outside
Australia
in 1995,
however
in 2010,
altough
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although
people
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the people
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conceived in
cities
of other countries was
markly
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markedly
higher than inside, the other two categories showed a
minimun
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minimum
percentage, roughly between 10 and 15%. In detail, in 1995 quantities of
people
born in
cities
and rural areas either in
Australia
or outside were higher than in towns.
Besides
,
overseas
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the overseas
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rate of conception was 60%
while
in
cities
was around 50%. On
ther
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the
other hand, in 2010, most
people
were born in
cities
, especially in
foreing
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foreign
forming
regions. The lowest rate of birth was in rural areas outside
Australia
.
Nevertheless
,
people
that were born locally in towns and countryside regions were equivalent, with a value just below 20
percent
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per cent
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.
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