The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013
The charts depict the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
Overall
, the proportion of travel
and clothes declined over the period, while
there was an increase in the indicator of books
and film
/ music
. Although
travel
ranked first,
it was overtaken by film
/ music
in 2013.
Initially
, the rates of travel
and clothes stood at approximately one-third and just under one-quarter respectively in 2003. Then
, the proportion of travel
decreased by 7%, the shares of clothes also
declined to 16% in 2013, and they accounted for 45 percent
of the whole chart together.
In 2003, the figure for Change the spelling
per cent
books
constituted 19% of the chart, while
for film
/ music
, it was 2% more than books
which accounted for approximately a fifth of the sales. Over the next 10 years, film
/ music
and books
increased and finished the period at 33% (film
/ music
) and 22% (books
) in 2013.Submitted by writingbhos on
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