The graphs' below show basic information about employment among people with and without disabilities in a certain country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
The given bar charts provide primary information about two times lower than no disabled
people
who employed
with diverse levels of disabilities in a particular country.
Add a missing verb
are employed
Overall
, there is a noticeable superiority of no disabled employees in both employment rates and average monthly salary, while
the immense discrepancy is registered between severely and non-severely disabled people
.
Looking into details, people
with no disability are responsible for 90% of recruitment levels meanwhile they also
head the list for regular median income. Non-severely disabled people
accounted for approximately 80%, which is four times higher than severely disabled individuals.
Turning to average monthly salary, severely disabled people
are at the bottom of the list with almost 1,000$, whichAdd a missing verb
is
people
. Employees who do not suffer from serious infirmity contribute to
just under 2,000$ to the second place. The share for Change preposition
apply
people
with no disability ranked first place with just over 2,000$.Submitted by bhoswriting on
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