WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar fromsugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The picture demonstrates the process of producing

sugar

from a specific kind of plant called

sugar

cane.

To begin

with

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with,

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the

produing

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producing

process,

sugar

canes

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cane

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growing for 12 to 18 months need to be

chose

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chosen

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.

Then

, there are two ways for the harvesting step, one is to use trucks which

has

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have

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specialized functions to collect and another is by manual workers to cut down

sugar

canes

in an original way. The

sugar

canes

are crushed into sweet

juice

by a crushing machine in the next process. After turning into liquid from solid, the sweet

juice

needs to be purified in limestone filters

then

the pure

juice

is transported to a specific device called

evaporator

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an evaporator

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to heat the

juice

to become

cyrup

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syrup

syrupy

.

Moreover

,

sugar

crystals are

seperated

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separated

in centrifuges from the

cyrup

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syrup

in an anticlockwise way and after the steps of drying and cooling, the

sugar

is

finally

manufactured.

Overall

, there are seven steps in total to make

sugar

using

sugar

canes

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cane

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and all these methods are necessary and effective.