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The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the five different brands' mobile phone
sales
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globally between 2009 and 2013.
Overall
, the
brand
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brands
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of
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Samsung and Nokia
were
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 the highest
sales
,
while
other
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the other
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 three brands
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accounted for lower rates. A more detailed look at the charts, in 2009,
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Nokia was presented as the highest
sales
 with around 440,
while
apple
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Apple
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 sold only 25, which was exactly two times lower than the
sales
 of ZTE and Samsung sold 220 cellphones. There were huge increases for
Samsung
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the Samsung
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 brand from 2009 and 2013,
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sales
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increased by 100 figures in 2011, and it was
rised
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raised
continuesly
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continuously
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 to 450 in 2013, which was the highest figure in
this
 data.
Moreover
, the number of Apple users rose to 150 in 2019, which was seven times higher than it was presented in 2009.
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, the
contsant
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constant
 decrease
were
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 accounted
on
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 users of LG and Nokia, which were lowered from 120 to 80 and from 430 to 250 respectively during these years.
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, the
users
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 of ZTE
were
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increased
slighly
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slightly
 from 50 to 70.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover, while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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