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Some feel that students should not have to take standardized tests in school to what extent do you agree ot disagree?

#feel #students #tests #school #ot
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Some people believe that taking standardized
tests
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 from school
children
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 should not be suggested. I do not agree with
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 idea and
children
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 should be examined by standardized
tests
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. Given standardized
tests
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 with clear
guide
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 and
criteria
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 would be necessary because it helps to right evaluation for
teachers
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 and suitable
exam
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 preparation for
students
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, having standardized
tests
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give
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opportunity
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the opportunity
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to
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right
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 evaluation for examiners, without
standard
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a standard
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 evaluation process could be hard to check
pupil's
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 ability.
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 is because
teachers
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 usually develop curriculum
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 their subjects,
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, exams are demonstrated
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 the content that
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thaught
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taught
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 in the classroom and
students
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, on history
subject
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subjects
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, if there is
not
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no
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 standard, it would be hard to prepare for the
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 because the concept of history is much broad area that everyone can understand by their own way of perspective.
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, school
tests
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 should be regulated by
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criteria
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,
test
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 for
children
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's
exam
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their
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 exams from the previous
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 and it could be
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a direction
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 for them.
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,
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the IELTS
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test
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 has
own
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its own
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standard
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standards
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 and
criteria
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, and if
test
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 takers understand them, the result
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will
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 be better than takers who do not know the standard.
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,
schools
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tests
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 should be standardized,
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guideline
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guidelines
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 and
criteria
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 should be developed by educators.
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, standardized
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test
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tests
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 can be evaluated wrong by pedagogies and can
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 false
mark
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 to
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,
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, I believe that the given mark can be fixed, if
students
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 think that it is not true.
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, schools need to have standards on their
exam
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, which would be easy for
teachers
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 and it helps to avoid marking from the personal view of point. To
condlude
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conclude
, school
tests
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 should be standardized with clear
guideline
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guidelines
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 and
criteria
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, which would help to evaluate the
students
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' skills.
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, it gives
right
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 direction to
students
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 for their
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 preparation.
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 it can be
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 evaluated, in
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 case,
children
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 can ask to re-access from their
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,
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