The graph shows the number of fatal injuries (resulting in death) of workers in New Zealand between 1992 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The graph shows the number of fatal injuries (resulting in death) of workers in New Zealand between 1992 and 2010.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The graph compares data about workers suffering from serious injuries, which led them to death in New Zealand during a 19-year period between 1992 and 2010.
It is clear that
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the country experienced the highest number of deaths in 1994,
while
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the trend was descending
overall
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, reporting the lowest value during the
last
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years.
Also
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, it has a fluctuating tendency with several peaks and dips during the period shown. In 1992, the figure started at 6,217 number of died workers
due to
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injuries in the workplace, witnessing a slight rise in the next year.
However
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, in 1994, it reached a peak of 6,632 deaths in total. Falling to approximately the same high as the previous years, it remained stable for the next three years and
then
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decreased gradually, dipping in 2003 at 5,534.
Following
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this
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, a similar trend started in 2002, with a consistent increase with the exception of 2005, which fell by almost 30 numbers and recorded another peak at 5.80, making it considerably lower than the former peak. Having dropped again more steeply, it dipped in 2009, showing the lowest amount of deaths during the whole period;
however
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, it rose negligibly in the
last
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year.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, last".
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dips" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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