Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California, and the rest of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California, and the rest of the world.
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usage
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in
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Diego
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,
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california
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and The rest of the
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overall
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the 3 charts of those places, mention the
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usage
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of
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different purposes, The Residential
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and
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area.
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is the
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percentage on
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charts,
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Diego
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and
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,
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world wide
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is the lowest percentage, so that gives us
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idea that we
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not base the
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useage
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usage
on just a country or state, because it changes
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world wide
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.
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the
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reason is the
higest
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highest
number of the other two reasons, but on
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california
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and
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Diego
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county
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.
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of
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is the smallest
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percentage
out of, Residential and
industry
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purposes. The graph
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us that there's not a lot of
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on
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the country
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17% of the
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used for
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cause
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has
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a lot in
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california
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having a 33
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percentage
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.
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,
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most
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important resource so we need to take care of it, The
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has the second place of use in the
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so we should be more aware of
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Diego
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, usage, san, diego, california, world, industry, agriculture with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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